Descending below

by JaMeS   Aug 15, 2007


Everyday i sit in shade
from the light i cannot go
each night i slowly fade
until i have nothing more to show

an outline of the past
half the soul i once were
my strength now at its last
death now an idea i prefer

I'm locked inside a cage
a hell within my mind
each thought now turns to rage
were happiness used to shine

my anger is always rising
as so called friends flee around
my future now not surprising
to the devil my soul is bound

now only hate surrounds
with deceit and all this pain
descending deep underground
away from gods rule of reign

all i am and ever once was
now he is surely to attain
for now this o so pale boy
will slowly die in vein

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    It was really good and descriptive, i loved it. very good job, flow was wonderful, wording was great.

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Thats a really good poem James! the flow is fantastic!!! great work, and dont worry, that writers block will you soon.
    your talented... god thing I created creativity or you would have never been able to pull thiss off lol jks
    Luv ya

  • 18 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Being locked in our own cages in the worst form of imprisonment that I have discovered.

    Locked away with only our thoughts and unable to hear the voices of those around us seems like hell in itself.

    You have done a very nice job typing this out. It appears that you have mastered the isolation process all too well.

    Good write babe

    --Sher

  • 18 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Dark, cool and mystifying! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Hebe

    This is a good poem.
    It really kept my attention.
    Loved reading it.
    Take care

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