A Shooting Star

by ben thompson   Apr 10, 2007


Midsts a shower of blazing fire envoy of a far off place.
A streaking blur of vivid dreams across both time and space.

Ancient traveler of mystery from galaxies long unseen.
Wished upon by stricken lovers under darks lunar beams.

Ravager of worlds, bringer of untold blight and woe.
Erasing our existence, blue sky turns black as coal.

Supersonic death, destruction as was long ago foretold.
Winds of fire extinguished by winter's infinite cold.

Why has your cosmic journey brought you here to me.
Hard to believe a shooting star shall decide man's destiny.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, I really enjoyed this. Keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is indeed an outstanding poem. Your skill of rhyming always surprises me, i find this pattern which you follow the toughest one but you just make it flow so moothly.

    great write indeed

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Well written with excellent word choices and rhyme.....awesome as usual. 5/5 Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by amanda flood

    Great poem so nicely written 5-5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ben
    Wow what a poem. Excellent job. Very descrptive. Flow and rhyme were great.

    Why has your cosmic journey brought you here to me.
    Hard to believe a shooting star shall decide man's destiny.

    This stanza really got me. I love to read your work.
    Take care Love Cindy

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