Darkness Expanse

by ben thompson   Apr 10, 2007


Land of demonic desolation.
Black winds hollow call.
Trees sway in lifeless animation.
Stirring fear within us all.

Molten flowing rivers.
Seared and cracking ground.
Dying screams of silence.
Time devoid of sound.

Evils unspeakable description.
Embedded deep, killing doubt.
Dimension basked in darkness.
Merciful pleas spread throughout

Visage of holy light.
Lost in abysmal expanse.
Satan awaits pure souls.
Death's ancient eternal dance.

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  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    When i joined this site, i was only able to write dark poems, but i am glad that you were not posting at that moment, otherwise i still would have been running for some identity... :o))

    you are really a very talented DARK POET

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Great dark poem once again. excellent imagery and word choices....5/5 Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by JustBeingDevine

    Excellent Poem I loved it, you can picture in your mind exactly what you reading-keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ben
    What a vivid descrption of what hell would be like. The way you penned this piece all you have to dois close your eyes and invision yourself being there. Not something I want to do....lol

    Visage of holy light.
    Lost in abysmal expanse.
    Satan awaits pure souls.
    Death's ancient eternal dance.

    Excellent job!
    Keep up the wonderful writing.
    Love Cindy

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