by Jessica Apr 11, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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Tiny droplets slither down cheeks; |
by Kaila
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OoOoOo!!! all of your poems are so filled with emotion it's like I'm writing it myself when I read it you give me a clear movie in my head nice job! |
by Darien
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Hmm, it seems as though someone is falling in love!.. I wonder who the lucky fellow is! He better not hurt my sweet cyber wifey! Beautiful poem hun, your love poems are exceeding mine! |
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I love the way you described love in this poem. Very nice, great vocabulary, and fantastic flow. Keep upthe great work! |
by Goran Rahim
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Wow for this one, i could feel the emotion through out the poem, and i believe this one is one of your best one........ cause its is just too great. |
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"Yearning for his gentle touch on longing skin, |