Motionless Dreams

by MyDevotion   Apr 12, 2007


Our love started from day one
It was more than fun
I felt free and wanted nothing more
I walked in, and you shut the door,

In our own world we'll sit and glare
Lay for hours in that motionless stare
You'd hold my hand, and whisper goodnight
I'd grasp it once, and hold it tight,

Dreams fall fast
Harder each time
Emotions long past
Rejuvenating with each rhyme,

Standing on top of the moon
Watching the dish, make haste with the spoon
I see your head turn aside
I feel your words, a cold goodbye,

Down you soar, falling faster
Dropping through the sky, stars won't catch her
My arms seem to have holes, her I can not snatch
With her speed, I can not match,

Left me once, now the time is near
For this one night, I have always feared
What once so perfect, now long gone
Our memories vanished, come to the end of our song.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    This is an excellent poem. The flow was great and the rhyming was really natural. I love the description in it, it creates great imagery. Well done. 5/5

    Tammie

  • 17 years ago

    by icarus

    I'm not a fan of poetry relating to love but i agree with sarah in that that was your best stanza. I actually reread it several times. Even though I dislike the topic you still managed to leave an impression.

  • 17 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    Wow great poem with amazing emotion, i love it

    ~brittany (MD)

  • Good poem. The flow was exellent and the emotion was deep.

    'Dreams fall fast
    Harder each time
    Emotions long past
    Rejuvenating with each rhyme,'

    My favourite stanza.
    Keep it up 5/5

    :Sarah: