Giving Up.

by xoOrdinaryGirlox   Apr 12, 2007


As I stand there gazing into your eyes,
I remember everything that happened.
Now you have come to claim your prize,
As you have succeeded in your game.

Nights of terror and torture but you did not mind,
You were only thinking of claiming your prize.
I could not believe i could have been so blind,
As i layed there cold, washed in my own blood.

You ripped me of my innocence,
The only bit of hope and faith i had.
I thought you had at least one bit of sense,
But you carried on as if nothing had ever happened.

Why did you do that to me?
I thought you said that you loved me.
Well that was too good to be true,
I always knew that we could never be.

Wishing you were behind bars,
Where every inch of you deserves to be
Instead your out their buying flash cars,
With what was supposed to be our money.

Everywhere you go, every step you take,
I will be there, watching, haunting you.
And as you sit there beside our lake,
I will make sure your remaining life is hell.

I well never stop this fight,
To get you where you are supposed to be
Your destination I have in sight,
And in my eyes there is no Giving Up.

_____Not True story_____

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  • 16 years ago

    by amoxi

    Wow this poem was amazing, i love reading you poetry ur a fantastic writer im making you one of my favorites so i can read more later

  • 17 years ago

    by Alisha

    That was great! it completely stuns you when it turns out to not be true because it seemed to be written with the passion of a victim. great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow..tht seemed like a true story to me....u did an excelent job on this.....i was sorta of like wow did he really did tht...u caught my attension and the ending not a true story i was like...r u dead serious?? good job =)