My last farewell

by Poetically Speaking   Apr 13, 2007


I fell apart, but you're free so no longer will you hurt.
You gave to me hope and showed me love;
You're with me forever,
and all of the stairs lead to you when I climb what we built above.

Seems like I've just begun to understand what you meant,
but that doesn't mean the memories don't dwell.
So I'm leaving this for you...
my last farewell.

The seasons aren't colorful when we watch the trees change,
they're gray and black with clouds towering above.
And if you listen to the east you'll remember what we shared,
and smell the hollowness of what we once loved.

Our love, it can never be brought back to life.
So alone, I die, because our love is just a shell.
I found you in the darkness, yet now you've found the light,
so to you I give this...
my last farewell.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Lozbi

    The ending of this is realli realli great!
    i like the style of the poem.. vry well put 2getha..
    keep up the fab work
    .x

  • 13 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Amzing poem love, it was so into depth as well as capturative. i agree with the person above, the last stanza was my favorite.

  • 13 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    Our love, it can never be brought back to life.
    So alone, I die, because our love is just a shell.
    I found you in the darkness, yet now you've found the light,
    so to you I give this...
    my last farewell.

    I loved the ending..I really didn't think the flow was any good...But wording of amazing...Overall 5/5