by Poetically Speaking Dec 18, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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How cruel is a heartless promise, |
by KemistryKia
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[[loved]] itt... |
by Ghost
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Heartbreaking. But the title really catches people's attention. It's very well written. I love it. When I read the words of this poem I can feel the pain deep inside. Keep up the wonderful work! |
by Benny Boi
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This really pulls the heart strings. I totaly understand this feeling. Hope this isnt based on real events... if so, stick in there. But... anyways, great write 9/10. Keep it up! |
by Prince LJ
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Although this was very heartbreaking, it was very good. i thoroughly enjoyed reading it, and almost felt as if i were in your shoes. great job :) |
by Siglawoo
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Pretty well written... |