Tears

I'm loving it.
It's not perfection.
But perfection IS imperfection.
But isn't a tear that falls from a face
Might also be a tear of happiness?

Wow I liked this one.. I liked how you described more than one reason that people cry, and I loved the short lines it kept it short sweet and to the point. The only critique I have is that it is kind of short and might be a little bit better under the quotes.. but thats just my opinion.

Wow. this is so true. its amazing! well done. they should put that in the dictionary under "tear"!

I really lik this poem. Good work.

Josie
PS. And thank you for your comment on my poem. Much appreciated...

Another great poem, it was very well written and it was very true, crying isnt very fun and people who cause pain are not good people