Twisted Repentance

by Georgi   Apr 15, 2007


Loves enemy,
The thrill of deceit;
The one time sensation I couldn't defeat.
Loves enemy,
The fake satisfaction,
Of lust,
Desperation;
A blinding attraction,
Judge me,
Condemn me,
This useless addiction,
Before I rely on my own cruel affliction,
Give me my sentence,
Oh twisted repentance,
Condemn me,
For brushing my heart with denial,
Oh God,
Please will you give me my trial?
'Till then,
I lay down,
With bitter desire,
My truth,
I pray it might carry me higher.
Sweet love,
Will you take me?
Trust me?
Believe
In the beautiful web that our hearts interweave.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Katran

    Fantastic. the beat was spot on, the word choice was perfect. keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Leslie

    This cought my attention from the beginning and kept me reading until the end. I really like it. the flow is catchy, i guess you would say. it's mesmerising and enthralling.
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  • 16 years ago

    by K3LSI3

    This is a really good poem.I liked it a lot.I read some of your other poems and they are really good too.Keep up the good work.You are a great writer.

    Kelsie

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    After reading that other wonderful poem of yours, I just had to take a look around at your other stuff. I really like this a lot. I don't usually go for poems that are just in one big stanza. Call it a personal preference. However, this is just so well written that I have absolutely no criticism of it whatsoever.

    Brilliance. A joy to read.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    That is so adorable... I hope you don't mind if i put that in my poem book? Lol i put all my poems in there along with other poems i really like.. N e ways, i really liked it. SOO cute. 5/5

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