Dont leave

by Krzysztof J   Apr 16, 2007


Please don't leave my side,
Oh god I'm begging you,
I'm on my knees right now,
So sad but it is true.

My tears they run like torrents,
From the highest waterfall,
My heart it dies so slowly,
As it becomes no more.

Just one more chance,
Just one last hope,
don't be so cruel,
Just spare a thought.

I'm not demanding i do still care,
I beg of you don't leave me bear,
Or take me with you I don't weigh much,
I will be good, i wont eat much.

Why must you go? it isn't fair!
What went wrong? why don't you care?
It doesn't matter but please don't leave,
With out you here its wrong, I'm weak.

My flaws are great I know that too,
But if you stay i wont hurt you,
I'll change i promise its not a lie,
I am so scared, you'll leave, I'll die.

I need you here so i beg you,
Don't leave me cold, don't leave me blue.
Just one more chance and things will change,
Don't let me die, you are a friend.

*i wrote this for a number of reasons, i'm not proud of it in fact i hate it! i hate having this character flaw, Gem sugested i post it so here it is, maybe it will help someone thru their pain*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    There are some people in the world who really feel this way even me there are times before i have feel and suffer about this situation. i think its very great flow and nice writen. i can honestly understand. and most important u write it w/all of ur hearts so this is very appreciated work for me. and everyone has their own opinion so for me i give it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Hey..it's a beautiful poem...though there are a few punctuation probs...the poem as a whole is well wriiten...beautiful!..kp writing!
    Tk care!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Cathy

    Very good poem! I am glad you posted it because their are so many people that feel this way, myself included at times. And reading poems like this helps us feel better knowing were not alone. Great job on this one! I just wish I could get into your love section as well lol. Well I give this 5/5 again a wonderful poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sometimes the best poetry comes when we pour out our hearts. This is a very touching piece.

    My flaws are great I know that too,
    But if you stay i wont hurt you,
    I'll change i promise its not a lie,
    I am so scared, you'll leave, I'll die.

    Great job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by Jen

    "Just spare a though" place a 't' on there hun.
    && i also bloody love you for posting this because this has matched exactly how i feel about losing someone just recently so reading this helped me understand it all =]
    Jen x

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