Cutting

by gasping for air   Apr 16, 2007


My heart is breaking....

my soul is aching....

my head is screaming....

the tears are streaming....

my hands tremble, fingers fumble....

my stomach takes a tumble....

i beg myself to stop....

my heart flipflops....

but my nerves are beggin for it.....

so i tell myself i dont give a shit....

and i let myself go....

this time i cant say no....

i feel my skin rip, my nerves scream out....

And the light goes out....

As I lay with tears in my eyes...

And fear in my heart......

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  • 13 years ago

    by tiger girl

    Powerful poem, flows really well. full of great emotion i can relate to. well done, luv ur work

  • 17 years ago

    by MiZz Nina

    Wow! this is good.. I had a vivid visual of the poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    Its really good..sorry its taken me so long to get on here..love ur poems

  • 18 years ago

    by JacKnife Jessica

    This poem is really good, you should rad some of mine, they pretty much rel;ate to yours....well i give u a 5/5...

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    "this time i cant say no....

    i feel my skin rip, my nerves scream out...."

    ^^ I love those lines!! Aaahh! So emotionally written..... Your vocab. was great & the flow was flawless. Wonderfully written, you're a great writer! Keep it up! 5.5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

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