Drowning

by gasping for air   Apr 16, 2007


My eyes open...

and the night comes rushing back to me...

all the pain...

all the anger...

all the frustration....

and that one act...

how i couldnt say no any longer...

and i want to cry...

i hate myself...

i hate all of this pain....

i hate how it calls to me...

i just want to be happy...

just want to be sane...

to be normal again....

im scared, it's getting worse..

im lost in this depression...

drowning in these tears i wont let myself shed...

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I can relate to this, and I really like the way you expressed emotions in the poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Suicide With A Smile

    Oh'ya. 5/5..My favorite line is: drowning in these tears i wont let myself shed...

  • 16 years ago

    by Suicide With A Smile

    I'm going to be honest, your poem doesn't follow a form. Not all should. The emotion is great. Try following something like abac?lt has the potential to sound great! Hope I didn't offend you. ~Addie~

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