A Flower Paperweight

Ah, took me two reads to get this, and the title helped. It's about a flower encased in glass right? And you are looking at it and thinking of how fakely alive it looks?

Again, an ace idea, which is half the battle with good poems, is the initial notion of the poem actually interesting enough to fuel a whole poem and keep it stoked.

I thought this piece would use more Grammar, because it does not have natural flow to it, unless you want everyone to find their own rhythm, which is fine. The last two lines are gold, and for me really make the poem becasue out of all the lines they say the most about your feelings for the object.

Well done.

Now pieces like this remind me of why I love poetry so much. despite being so short, the depth you put into this was stunning. this created so many emotions for me. despite not rhyming, the flow in this is wonderful. beautiful work.

If you didn't title the poem A Flower Paperweight, I might have known that's what it was. Even though it was short, the meaning was clearly grasped. I could actually picture a paperweight. Nice job.
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Paperweight such an usual subject to write about.......?? Excellent write.. beautiful...
perfect..... unique .........

This poem is very beautiful, and it was nicely penned. I wish it could have been a little longer, but you did a lot with the small amount of space you had. Nice vocabulary. 5/5.