The pain from a careless rider

by Julienne   Apr 17, 2007


Brutal sudden jerks
as the metal clunks
against my teeth

my tongue rips open
and the taste of blood fills my mouth
sweat pours from my underneath

jabbing at my ribs
an awkward unbalance
swishing boots
brushing, thudding, bristleing my hair

dull thuds
as legs crash against my ribcage
my mind is reeling

my body aches
but still i persevere
please try and understand my pain

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Really well written, it is a little short, but it was really stong with emtion, I could almost feel the pain for real. Your words are well chosen and again, I think you did an awesome job 5/5

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