Yes (short)

by Crystal Gaze   Apr 17, 2007


You ask if I love you? I say yes
you ask if I need you? I say yes
you ask if I want you? I say yes
you ask if I would die for you? I say yes

You start to ask another question, my finger stills your lips.
I love you, I need you, I want you, I would die for you....

My last words stilled on these lips by your kiss.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    Very nice poem!! :-) 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Yessss!!!! This is 100% unique. The cohesion is there though it is of 7 lines. Very impressive piece with sheer simplicity. Great work 5/5 for sure :)

    With love
    fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    Awesome job i wish it was a straight 5/5 but even my vote cant bring it up?

  • 16 years ago

    by STEVE

    Short but good you write a pretty good poem 5/5 Steve

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    I think this is one of my favorites.
    But I like all of ur poems. :)

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