Shooting Stars [Haiku]

by Tammie   Apr 18, 2007


In the deep blue sky
They shoot across suddenly
Granting someone's wish

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Haiku is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5). Haiku is usually written in the present tense and focuses on nature.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Lol.
    Simple.
    I wish a shooting star would grant MY wish.
    Lol.

    Hmm...
    Come to think of it.
    I don't know what my wish is, yet.
    Weird.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was perfect, the imagery was so vivid i could picture the dark nights sky in my mind and watch a shooting star shoot straight across it. I truely loved this. It was fantastic well done~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Heu hun, this was a great poem. I like Haiku:)

    The Angel of Secrets

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    AWH. I really liked that, it was so sweet. The descriptions you used created a nice image in my mind and you also managed to tie in a cute kind of feel to the poem. Lovey job hun. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Hey tammza. well done with this excellent poem. short yet sweet. less is best. right? thats how the famous saying goes.

    5/5 always. David

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