Past

by Darkening Dawn   Apr 18, 2007


Timid
steps.
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*****d
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Laughter

echoing
beneath the ancient boughs of the past,
A dead END.
An aimless walk
Living an existence with no pause-

To breath
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creating a c i r c u l a r track
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a track to run through the old memories of the past
which now looms over the present

It is a familiar path
one which has been walked before

Put stars where there should be spaces

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  • 17 years ago

    by ALEX

    Oh wow. that is beyond amazing. i LOVE your style.

  • 17 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    Nice poem.. Like the style...

    Mooi gedoen....

    Keep it up! :)

    Josie

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