Inner Turmoil

I really loved this course i feel like this everyday at least im not alone.

Topic's cliched but it's alright. I really liked the imagery and basically word choice. The first stanza was truly gripping. Not a genuine favorite topic but it's okay because it works with the imagery. Some emotional aspects follow through. Not the best but not the worst for this type of topic. Still it's a good write with a nice sad current throughout the entire piece.
~Faith-less

You should really add some punctuation into this.
It would turn this into a pretty darn good poem.

First stanza?
Very relatable to me back in the days.

Second stanza?
Loved the two lines.
Second two lines?
My life is hopeless like my love story..
There is no more hope! In this filthy world!
Um... really, really dramatic.
But very poetic, actually.

Everyone seems to live a lie each day
Everyone lies and talks behind our back..
You said "lie" two times.
Maybe you could change it?

Umm..
Really dramtic, my dear.
And also, really cliched.
I loved your beginning.
It's relatable to me.
But asking angels for help usually means
Asking angels to take you away.
At least it does in my mind.
Correct me if I'm wrong please.
All in all.
This deserves a four.
No more, no less.

This ia another good work from u..
"The sky is as dark as my shaggy hair
The sun is cold like my shattered heart
My life is hopeless like my love story.."
lovely write...very beautiful lines!
And teh opening line was superb..loved it!
xxPoojaxx

This poem wasn't as good as the others I read, but still it was good. the imagery was alright, and the word choice was good, and the vocab was great. You did a good job. thanks for sharing 4/5