Panic

by Marie   Apr 20, 2007


I'm crawling to my corner
gasping for breath
my head throbbing with pain
surely heading for death

I put my arms around my knees
and slowly rock, back and forth
thinking of my future tasks
stressed from all the sorts

I'm trying to calm down
I really truly am
this all is painful afterall
I mean god dam.n

headache, back ache
eyes stinging with urge to cry
surely if i keep this up
I'm soon going to die

Soon i start to cry
With only enough breath to live
still huddled in my corner
still wondering if

if things will be alright
If things will go my way
If things will all be fine
If i wait just one more day....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alma

    Beautiful poem it was sad but true it was real and raw and thats what I loved about it
    congrats on such a wonderful piece of poetry
    laters

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    an awesome poem, the flow was terrific and as well as the rhyming, you did a good job on describing a panic attack, good work 5/5
    kisses Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by Perfection

    This is pretty good... and you did end it in a very good way... Nice structure and flow and you do describe panic pretty well ...

    Very enjoyable =)