by Marie Apr 20, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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I'm crawling to my corner |
by Alma
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Beautiful poem it was sad but true it was real and raw and thats what I loved about it |
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Hey, |
by Perfection
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This is pretty good... and you did end it in a very good way... Nice structure and flow and you do describe panic pretty well ... |