Under The Rainbow

by Mezmeryz   Apr 20, 2007


The skies are crashing down
To the ground below
Rain mingles with tears
Making a river flow

The deserted streets
Are wet but bright
The last bird fleets
Right out of sight

Grey clouds are rolling
Slowly apart
Loud silence helps me hear
The beat of your heart

Promised I'd be there
But it's the path you chose
Now your suffering
From the prick of that rose

You can't hurt no more
As I hold you tight
And the warmth overcomes us
As the sun shines bright

You will never be alone
In this world so cold,
In my heart and my soul,
You, I'll forever hold

As people enjoy,
You don't want to be the last
Let me be your shadow,
Because moments move fast

The skies no longer cry,
And the sun no longer frowns
Life no longer flees,
Birds make their nature sounds

Whilst hand in hand
As one we go,
Walking slow,
Under the rainbow.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    The explanations were so powerful like the wording
    It was so sweet and touching
    Keep it up
    Take care,
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    It's a very sweet poem of how you will be there for your friend no matter what. It's a very nice poem and I like it alot. I love the emotional imagry here, it speaks of another deeper feeling underneath it all. Very very well written for sure!! 5/5!!

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    The last bird fleets

    That line didn't seem to make sense to me. I think you ment "flees" Or something along them lines. Other then that i found this poem to be interesting. Quite sweet. Well done on a nice pome you have here~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    "As people enjoy,
    You don't want to be the last
    Let me be your shadow,
    Because moments move fast"

    ^ I loved this stanza. It really summed up what you were wanting to say.

    Excellent. You're a talented writer.

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Ok i llllllllllooooovvvveeeeed this poem it was so beautiful it reminds me of bright colurs and bunnys and stuff

    xxx alex xxx

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