White Feathers Rain

Wow very nice poem. you did a great job on this one. i love the abab rhym and the flow was great.

The angel covers you in a coat
Blanketed in a shield
Around you angel feathers float
Love: the greatest weakness, the strongest feeling...
On can ever wield.

this last stanza was really good, you ended the poem very nicely. 5/5 and keep up the good work.

Aww this is really good. i enjoyed reading it very much. it flowed so nicely. wonderful job on writing it! 5/5

~Kristina

This poem was soo very cute, I didn't understand some of it though, but in all. Oh my, it was amazing. Soo cute, made me smile!! I especially loved :
"Every answer stays the same
Oh an angel feels such sorrow
Doesn't know of what became
Or how to survive tomorrow"
That stanza was soo amazing!!
Great job!!!!
Alissa:)

Very beautifully written. It was an amazing read. Great flow, well pinned, excellent show of emtion. 5/5 keep up the good work. I love your poems