Watch the Sunset

by Kayla   Apr 21, 2007


W ishing you were here
A fter a stressful day
T he sun slowly goes down
C atching daylight one last time
H ere right beside me

T he loneliness begins to grow
H ere inside this empty heart
E nter the light without me love

S ing with me a sweet love song
U ntil we both can't breathe
N ever let go of my hand
S ee the pain inside my eyes
E ntire time surrounded by your love
T he loneliness begins to leave

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I know this is really bad and probably doesn't make any sense, but I just wanted to try something new.. I hope you all somewhat enjoyed it!

4/20/07 ~Loveless Nights~

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  • 16 years ago

    by Helen

    Its very catchy and a interesting way of writing it :)

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I usually don't like reading love poems, they're too mushy and cliched nowadays. Nonetheless, you did pull me into this one.

    "S ing with me a sweet love song
    U ntil we both can't breathe"

    ^^ Those lines were AMAZING. Something about them really got me, and I loved this.

    5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lyric

    First off i wanted to thank you for ur comment. honestly i didnt think my poem was that good or any of my poems really but other people tell me their really good so yea. but i really liked ur poem. its nice and i can relate as well. Its a good poem and i think u express ur self well. its good. keep it up

    LYRIC

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