Losing Control

by Anonymous Angel   Apr 21, 2007


Tension and anger, in my body and mind,
confusion and betrayal, is what I find
I wonder, what were you thinking when,
you lost control of yourself, again.

Love and happiness, there was a time when I still possessed those,
loathing and hate, are the only emotions that still grows
How can you just knock me down, telling me that everything is my fault,
bruises and a heart ache,those are the results.

Sadness and despair, is what I feel when you raise your hand again,
self-pity and pain are the emotions that I gain
In your eyes I cant do anything right,
but all of that will end tonight.

Compassion and sorrow, is what my friends and family felt in many ways,
rescued and now loved, after a couple of days,
I finally have no bruises any more, every trace of you has been erased.
maybe now I can be happy and embrace my future with open arms.

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  • Wow, this is a good poem. You totally expressed your feeling very well. 5/5

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Oh wow I really enjoyed this :) Wonderfully penned! choice of words was good, vocab was great, out of your three poems this one's the best keep writing! and sorry for the late comment :)

    5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Another good one. I liked the flow of it. 5/5

    Ravyn

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I loved the rhyming. You are very good at it. Unlike me:) The flow was wonderful and I really liked the word choice and the format you used worked great. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Yourmyangel

    I really like this poem too..it was perfect..5\5 good job