Step into my cauldron

by Independence Forever   Apr 21, 2007


Come now children don't be shy
into my cauldron, don't ask why

i have many surprises in store for you
come in, and remember to bring your crew

step lively, there's no harm in a peek
we could play a game of hide and seek

don't think twice, you might regret it
you've come so far, you can't just quit

in my cauldron you'll find some old friends
because from here on, your happiness ends

time for you to die, my cauldron waits hungrily
from you i derive my power, i crave it longingly

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I love thes dark magic type of poems. Again liked the format. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Amanda

    Very nice. I like how you used cauldron as a way of death because cauldron is a pot for cooking. lol....very unique...Def. 5/5!
    -Amanda

  • 17 years ago

    by Greg Beam

    This is great. great rhythm and great word useage. very nice flow. keep up the great writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    All I could think of was Hansel and Gretle,It was like a scary kids story ,very good!

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    That was chilling. i loved it. it is diffrent from most of the poems i read. You did a good job. Please keep up the work and thanks for the comments.

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