Lovely Pain

by KeyxMashingxParody   Apr 21, 2007


Sweet sorrow,
Sweet blood,
Sweet thoughts,
Misunderstood.
Peaceful bliss,
Peaceful place,
Peaceful smile,
On your face.
Lovely scars,
Lovely pain,
Lovely dark skies,
From all the rain.
Beautiful life,
Beautiful immortality,
Beautiful mind,
Full of insanity.
Precious moments,
Precious touch,
Precious abyss,
Felt too much.
Sour feeling,
Sour heart,
Sour life,
Torn apart.
Decaying thoughts,
Decaying dreams,
Decaying sun,
And it's beams.
Tasteless peace,
Tasteless bliss,
Tasteless love,
Is what I'll miss.

-Liz-
(I know it's a bit sketchy, but I am really upset, and needed to get this out. thank you)
~of life to live, only death is near~

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I loved how you repeated words in this poem it sounded really catchy. Liked the format and the style. Well done nice piece of poetry. ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    I rarely see a poem done like this. you pulled it off, great job.

    your servant:
    david