Stormy Night

"I want to reside in this solitude"
Such great choice of words...beautiful work..great imagery and the lines were filled with emotions..great work!
xxPoojaxx

Not a bad poem. The title madem e feel as though the poem was quite dark and i owndered what it was about. I liked the first stanza of the poem, it makes the reader ask all these questions, why are you on a stormy beach? Why are you avoiding someone? WHo are you avoiding. It really caught the readers attention. In the secound stanza you used alliteration, "dark day". I liked the poem up till tehre. But the next two stanza's... just didnt work for me. I dont know... The last stanza seemed kinda like a joke or soemthing. But you had a good usage on emotion in this poem. Very powerful. I htought you hsould of used a more variety of punctuation though. Keep writing! xx

Out of the boredom of the classroom something great arose. You did a great job on this, agaiin the imeregry was vivid and clear, the emtions were strong. Beautifully written. You have talent, don't let anyone try to tell u diffrent, not even yourself. 5/5

This was ok. I liked the first three stanzas, the last stanza I have mixed feelings about though.
The line "I want to reside in this solitude" was fantastic, and to me was the strongest line of the poem.
The reason why I'm not sure about the final stanza is because it seems like you're "gibbering" and repeating yourself when you don't need to. I like how you said I hate her, then contradicted yourself my saying I love her really, I just think the way you wrote it was a bit "blaa."
Interesting poem though, I enjoyed it.

You did a great job. :D
I liked it, a lot actually. I think it's easily related to, which makes it more likable.
The feelings weren't in great detail, but the atmosphere was, which I actually liked. I usually don't, eh.

You did a great job, keep it up.
5/5