Razor blade

by jeffery sechrest   Apr 27, 2007


The blood slowly dripping from his fingers.As he lets the razor fall.He dose not blame anyone.But every one knows it was her fault.He looks at her picture.Trying to hold it still,but he can't.The feeling of weakness overwhelming him.As he whispers her name.He has thought of this a hundred times,but has never been so close to death.All alone is how he wanted to go, and that is how he went.Unknown to him is the lives he will leave torn in two.
In the morning they find him.Cold as can be and very sill.In his eyes all life is gone.Beside him is a note explaining why he had to die so that he can live. As they lied him in the ground they cried.But as she dropped her rose she heard a whisper telling to love and never be sad.But she found the same comfort in the razor blade as she went to join her love that night.

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  • 17 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    That's beautiful. that's all ai can say.
    --musiclives23

  • 17 years ago

    by broken wings

    This kind of writing is so common now a days that u get used to it, but end up loving these types every single time. plz finsh it, it's really good.
    -with love

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    When you finish this one let me know, tihs is my fave so far, there is one spelling error if you care to know. my fave so far,
    WOW
    nessa