Lost

by Joseph Koglin   Apr 27, 2007


Contentful chaos walking by my side,
It creeps close and slowly I derive.
I lose all feelings of life and no one can really see,
That I've lost all hope and Im not what I used to be

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  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Flow's a little off , but I loved the last line...very good ending.
    Charisma*

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Awsome!!!♥luved it

  • 16 years ago

    by mel

    Very nice its short but works =)
    read some of mine pweez mel x

  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    This has great potential to be longer excellent job

  • 16 years ago

    by brianna

    It was really good...i feel it has potential to be longer though!! however great job!!5/5

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