Somewhere Within You

by Mezmeryz   Apr 29, 2007


I feel like I'm dying
Can't you see?
I feel like I'm having
You ripped out of me

Breathing without you
Brings so much pain
You pumped the blood
That ran through my veins

I now have a hole
Where my heart used to be
Keep what you stole
It's where I want to be

In this world I may fade
But what can I do
I want to remain
Always and forever
Somewhere within you

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  • 16 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Wow. This is so packed full of emotion. It's wonderful!! The thoughts and feelings that are packed into the losing of a friend hurts and kudo's to a great write. The flow and and everything is very well done!! Great job 5/5! I loved it!

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Sweet like the way you use your words un

    xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow I liked this poem.. and I agree with Laura it does sound like lyrics. Losing a friend is one of the most painful things out there and its so hard to stop once its set in motion.. I loved the word choices and from them I felt all of your pain. Wonderful write. The first stanza was definatly my favorite because of the image you described. thanx for sharing this with us all.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    I liked your choice of words and flow...you know what?it could be a good song..it makes you feel like a lyric..You have talent hun,hope you don't waste it
    Well done
    Sincerely,
    Laura

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