Unexpected Love

by Sweet lig   Apr 30, 2007


I never thought this love would happen to me
This is not the way I planned to be

It's so unexpected, i met you one night
Your words so sweet and so real

My feelings for you are so strong
I knew I Love You more than you know

I never think you'd be the one
The one that I'd been always loving

This feeling of mine is so rare
Never expect what would be happen for tomorrow

Unexpected feelings so fast
And heart was so powerful

Every beat of my hearts
Is unexpectedly....

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  • 18 years ago

    by Blissful

    "Unexpected feelings so fast
    And heart was so powerful"
    ^I could relate with that so strongly ... well said.

    The poem as a whole held meaning and emotion but I think you could add a lot more to it. Beautifully done though *5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by santino

    That sounds like inmidiat love.... nice poem i like it

  • 18 years ago

    by Blissful

    The last two lines were beautiful...
    All in all a cute piece that I enjoyed.
    Well done *5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Shinobi

    A nice show of emotions. The rhymes are rarely seen and the flow is a little weird. again a 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    This is an awesome poem, short and simple but ti was beautifully expressed. it was straight to the point and love is great when it creeps up on you mysteriously, 5/5

    nikki

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