Empty Arms

by debbylyn   May 2, 2007

Darkness played
Disguised as a whisper
As scars
Upon the dream of the moon

In a lover's gaze
Broken stars fell
Softly dying
As wishes slumbered
In the dormant light

Dreams abandoned
To empty arms


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  • 15 years ago

    by she

    Wow,very good,5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Kelsie

    I love the way you put your words so beautifully together. 5/5 great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Lines are short, description yet to a minumum. different and exciting. well done.

    5/5 David

  • 16 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    Your poetry runs deep debbie, i mean it, short but this is so great, love it, another 5/5!!! keep them comming!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenHeartStillBeat

    Its sad but pretty. Feeling is everything.