Lip Decay

by Jenni Marie   May 3, 2007


Used to tell you everything
Longed to be in your arms
What happened to our love
When did it lose it's charm?

There was a time long ago
Where we were always kissing
Now days slowly pass by
Still our love is missing.

Can't even remember the last time
We cuddled in a sweet embrace
Every time I look at you
It's like seeing a stranger's face.

My whole world is feeling cold
Don't know what to do with myself
Think it's time we admitted
Our love could use some help.

My lips are feeling lonely
Since your heart walked away
They used to be so vibrant
Now they've started to decay.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Amazing.
    A heartbreaking read about a lost love. I can relate very much.... :[ The flow was flawless, the emotions were clear & strong, & your word usage was fabulous.

    "Can't even remember the last time
    We cuddled in a sweet embrace
    Every time I look at you
    It's like seeing a stranger's face."

    ^My favorite stanza. I have felt this before so I can def. relate. Spectacular job! Keep writing! 5.5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 16 years ago

    by carissalynn

    *sniff sniff* ooooooohhhhhhhhhh, so touchingly sadd. gawd i liked it!
    Carissa [[=

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    This is great...you put it together perfectly and it can relate with anyone! I give it a 5!
    ~Kayla~
    AKA-AboveTheCrowd

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