The missing piece to my dreams

by CrazyNlove   May 3, 2007


Im in love with the man in my dreams
i know his name but know not his face
the things that i know are all that i need to understand my dreams
i see how he treats me and how he tries to understand
i see the way he tells everyone else that im his
i see how we touch, how we talk, how we kiss
the missing piece to the puzzle of my dreams ..... is me seeing his face

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  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Naw this was excellent. i don't know why you would think other way. well this was so nice and i like how you end this, that you cant see his face. yet all thru the dream you can see both of you touch and kiss and talk.

    excellent. 5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    This is good! I like it you really like free-verse style ehehehe! keep up the good work! keep writing my friend =)

    "i know his name but know not his face" have you met him in the internet? hehe just curious!

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