The Writing on the Bathroom Stall

by KeyxMashingxParody   May 3, 2007


She walks through each hall,
Blanking out each face.
A blur in her mind,
A scar from each place.

Holding her books tight,
Trying to hide the tears.
All of those threats,
She's dealt with each year.

"We'll rape you by the stairs,"
The same boys would say.
Boys she didn't know,
They said this every day.

She had to keep silent,
After every threat.
Gambling her life,
Here, she'll lose her bet.

Innocence meant nothing,
Police didn't care.
After she told,
All the kids stared.

She walks through each hall,
Blanking out each face.
A blur in her mind,
A scar from each place.

In the bathrooms,
She looks at the wall.
Horrible things about her,
Written on the stall.

She lets all her tears go,
She gags from the pain.
Throwing up nothing,
She feels so insane.

She doesn't understand,
Why people are so cruel.
Hurting kids they don't know,
Breaking each rule.

She leaves in disgust,
Remembering each scar.
The kids who gave them,
the kids who went to far.

She walks through each hall,
Blanking out each face.
A blur in her mind,
A scar from each place...

...Time for class, time for pain, school is in, rumors insane....

-Liz-

(I've dealt with kids like this for both years of high school I've been here, and I must say, I don't understand why some kids are like this... I had to get this out. Thank you if you read this.)[I've had a few people get confused on this poem, just so you all know, this is a true story of what I've dealt with. You do not have to believe me, I posted this for I needed to get emotions out. Thank you once again.]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    It was kind of long but I liked it. Another 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I really really liked this. You have some talent. It is sad that there are kids that act that way. The emtions were deep, clear, and strong. I liked the reptition thoughout the poem, it made the flow flawless. this was an excellent write. Keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Very deep, a look at a traumnatized girl. excellent writing, good pacing, and a whole lot of right on.

    your servant:
    david

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    This seems a lot like a story
    And less than a poem.
    It also doesn't seem that realistic to me.
    How would the police not care
    After she told them about the rape.
    That would be a crime.
    Or maybe I just interpreted it wrong.
    Are you talking about in her head
    She told them and they didn't care?
    'Cause that would make a whole lot of sense
    Lol.
    Sorry for being mean.
    But I know you could do better.
    I've read a lot of your works.
    But still.
    I'll give this a 4/5 :]