by KeyxMashingxParody May 3, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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She walks through each hall, |
by Brittany C
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It was kind of long but I liked it. Another 5/5. |
by Vanessa
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I really really liked this. You have some talent. It is sad that there are kids that act that way. The emtions were deep, clear, and strong. I liked the reptition thoughout the poem, it made the flow flawless. this was an excellent write. Keep up the good work. 5/5 |
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Very deep, a look at a traumnatized girl. excellent writing, good pacing, and a whole lot of right on. |
by Startle Me
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This seems a lot like a story |