We Have What You Are Looking For. [Acrostic]

by Teria   May 4, 2007


Warned the night before,
Entitled to her will.

Having nothing left,
All from a man who can't kill.
Various reasons he decides he's
Entitled to his will.

Wanted dead or alive.
He's fighting for his life.
All he can do is hope and pray
That everything will go right.

Yielding from her demands.
Outcast, that's what he is.
Under supervision of a killer.

Along his arms are bruises..
Retrieved by her, and he still thinks he's
Entitled to his will

Lovers once, enemies now.
Opened and shut, his
Own fearful heart.
Kindness filling his emotions
Inside his wretched mind.
Nothing can change him but
God's given will.

For, he's searching for what
Only they really have. A
Right to his own feelings

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  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    So, I can't write Acrostics to save my life and this was like [Slap to the face.] "You obviously suck at writing Acrostics, Sheena, because it seems so easy!"

    Lmao. This is really good. I'm not sure, but I disliked something about it. But I don't know what. However, I liked a few lines here and there [they stuck out to me] and such. So, nicely done. =]

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I suggest punctuation. I know you know it, and it will really help the flow/meaning.
    Also, the flow is a little off...that may be because of above comment.

    Otherwise.
    I really liked this. It was an interesting read and about something I've never read before. Nicely done. Congrats.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I was really enjoyed reading this poem till last lines: "For, he's searching for what
    Only they really have. A
    Right to his own feelings ". I think this doesn't fit in the rest of the poem.

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