Stop Right There!

by Teria   May 4, 2007


Stop right there!
Take a look around you.
The love that's in the air.
Don't you see it?
Yet again, you don't.

Hold it!
Smell the aroma around you.
A loving sensation, isn't it?
Don't you smell it?
Yet again, you don't.

Freeze!
Taste the lovely flowers,
that are swaying from the breeze.
They're edible you know?
Yet again, you don't.

Wait A Minute!
Listen to the cars,
swiftly driving by.
Don't you hear them?
Yet again, you don't.

Stop right there!
Take a look around you.
Don't you feel the love that's here..
Don't you feel it?
Yet again, you don't.

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  • 18 years ago

    by stefanie

    Nicely written. i can relate to this one. great job. and thank you again for the honest commenting. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    Nice write. Liked the idea of the repetition.

    Great job!

    Josie

  • 18 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Another great poem! you really like repetition style dont you :P uhm. flow was good! well penned keep it up!

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