Writer's Paradise

by RainbowSlider   May 7, 2007


So glad you chose to share such intimate details of your life.
Don't worry about what they say or about being a lesbian wife.
Your relationship with her I admire and you just have to share.
You are a secret lover and I know life just isn't always fair.

But would you jeopardize what you two have to be with her?
No, I didn't think so and you are right to be a secret lover.
A part of her love is your's and a part of her love is just his.
I am just glad you are smart enough to realize all of this.

It is not all black and white like you say and we have gray.
But if you tried to change reality wouldn't it just go away?
Hold your pearls most precious to your broken heart.
I know it doesn't really change things but its a start.

True, there are many who couldn't understand your way.
They would see you as the one who shouldn't stay.
Torned between heaven and hell; Don't give up.
There is for certain a much more bitter cup.

You can share your poetry and we can see.
We can read about the other loving family.
Thanks for sharing and thinking of me.
Fantasy can be real; Realer than reality.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Isabella

    Why is the rating only 3.5?
    It should be much much higher!!!
    5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Soft Parade

    I think you managed the poem well in its structure and got the feelings of the person through well.

  • 17 years ago

    by Seth

    Hm.. Well it was nice. It flowed ok.. It could be better. Try to have the same amount of syllables. Or some sort of rhyme scheme.
    The choice of vocabulary is dull. Some of it didn't make sense.. All in all it needs alot more work.. Hope i helped. Thanks for sharing