Find Me, Please (Tetractys)

by Lu   May 8, 2007


Tetractys should express a complete thought, profound
or comic, witty or wise using 20 syllables.
consists of at least 5 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10
syllables (total of 20)
Double Tetractys: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1
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Inspired from this picture ....
http://news.bbc.co.uk/media/images/41318000/jpg/_41318909_nigercryingchild300.jpg

Deep
within
eyes of pain
there will be found
silver specks just waiting to be polished

cloth of love held by hands of compassion
cleanse with kisses
wipe with love
find me
please

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Luanne the one thing I love about you is how you can be given any new kind of poem (style wise) and without any hesitation you can just BOOM come up with something like this.....I liked this good job!!
    5/5 as always!
    Chels

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Luanne
    Great job on this poetry form. I still can't get it right..lol...yours is great :)
    Take care love Cindy