Whisper me lies

by fvalconbridge   May 9, 2007


** read this poem out loud and whisper it. It sounds so much better, I was in a bit of a sick mood when I wrote it and it really doesnâ??t sound right if itâ??s not whispered, and the punctuation should really be used properly for it to flow.

Voices voices whisper lies,
Voices voices whisper lies,
Voices voices whisper lies,
Voices voices whisper liesâ?¦

And they echoâ?¦

I breath in deep,
I walk, slowly,
Numb hands trailing across white tiles,
Not for much longer.

I press every stall as I walk by,
An icy spray hits the floor,
Every tap,
Is turned,
Splashing, Flooding, flowing.

I slide down the tiles,
Tears slide down my face,
I dig my nails into the floor,
They snap,
They bleed,
But no painâ?¦.
And I remember.

Red.
Flashes ofâ?¦ red.
Thinkâ?¦ red
Memories in red.

Voices voices whisper lies,
Voices voices whisper lies,
Voices voices whisper lies,
Voices voices whisper liesâ?¦

And they echoâ?¦

Iâ??m soaking wet,
Why?
Iâ??m shivering,
I canâ??t stop.
Why?
Iâ??m crying,
Why?
Thereâ??s water everywhereâ?¦
Red water on white tiles.
Why?
And I remember, I know.

Voices voices whisper lies,
Voices voices whisper lies,
Voices voices whisper lies,
Voices voices whisper liesâ?¦

And they repeat.

And I wish that this would;
All,
Just,
Stopâ?¦

STOP IT!
STOP SPEAKING, JUST STOP!

Voices,
Whisper lies
And they echo,
They repeatâ?¦

And I wish they would all just stopâ?¦

Voices voices whisper lies,
Voices voices whisper lies,
Voices voices whisper lies,
Voices voices whisper liesâ?¦

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Amazing poem, it made me shiver, and I just had to read it several times to go through the whispers
    again and again...

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara

    Wow, amazing..and intesnse...just well...wow lol sory its just too good for my words

  • 16 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    Wow its.. very haunting. well done. the whispering thing was really affective. 5/5

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