Today again

by Infected with His Deadly Love   May 9, 2007


Today, again I'll think of you
And what we could of been
But I am nothing to you
The truth now, I have seen

These crimson tears flow
At the thought of you
I thought you'd always be there
To help me get through

But I was wrong again
To you, I never mattered
In this room full of darkness
My heart left shattered

© Sarah Elliott 2007

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    If I could have a quater for every time I felt like that, I'd be rich!!! Great flow! 5/5

    Josie

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    I liked it. The flow was good. I liked the stanza with the line about crimson tears. over all, it was a great poem filled with true emmotions, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    I liked the flow, it was pretty amazing. The emotions could be stronger- as said above- with a little stronger word choice. I love the meaning and I thought it portrayed great emotions.
    Keep it up..
    Elaine.

    P.S thanks so much for the comment on my poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    That was good. the flow was almost flawless, the word choice was good, and the emtion was clear. I liked it, but I think if the word choice would have been a little stronger, the emtions would have been more powerful. Still a good read. 4/5

Read All Comments (4)

More Poems By Infected with His Deadly Love