My Savior

by Krazy   May 12, 2007


I feel the anger inside
starting with a thought
growing with each breath
i feel the encroaching pain
sharpening with every word
the regret blooms
as tears consume me

i wait for my savior
both beside me and above me
waiting for that embrace
for the calmness to scoop me up
i long to feel the tickle of a smile
the gurgle of a laugh
i wait to be whole again

the pain is lasting
the embrace is strong
the words are encouraging
the kiss is just a taste
of the pure happiness
that could be mine

the cycle is never ending
one leads to another
as i become engulfed with emotions
it's a pin ball game
back and forth
and it's up to me to control it

i loose control
it's down once again
and the pain flares
the tears stream
the yell grows deep within me
only to be met with love

from her savior
both beside her
and above her

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  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie84

    After reading ONE poem it's clear that you have talent! Girl, you need any of us to tell you that you can...grab your pen and get busy!!! :) This is a very nice write...

    I started writing when I was a little younger than you. I would write and then rip it up. I loved writing ever since I was YOUNG but never thought I was any good. It wasn't until I was 18-19 that I started saving my writes and sharing them. Don't be silly like that. WRITE - WRITE - WRITE...let me tell you, even if I thought your writing was boring and dull, I would tell you the same thing. Even if YOU were the only in the world who liked your writing...that is reason enough to keep going. This is YOU...this is YOURS...don't count on anyone else because YOU are the only one who come through!!!!!

    Beautiful write my friend. KEEP WRITING!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Amazing poem, it is full of emotion and wonderfully written...I have no further criticism as for what others said. Keep it up!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    I'm glad I read the comments before I posted mine..... I was going to say exactly the same as Sunny did..... drop the filler words. Other than that I think its a beautiful and inspiring poem.... you've used some wonderful words, well done. On to read some more. You've asked for help in the group, so we are gonna help...... lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Laura

    This was beautifully penned. The first stanza was strong and captured my attention urging me to read on. The feeling of pain, sadness and happiness weave through this write. I thought it was an awesome write!!

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