Night of sorrows

by Boy   May 12, 2007


In the dark night under the shadow
of black sky I was standing near the
shore of the sea where Miles seemed
on thousands feet away from my happiness
I was standing in this stage of my life
and A touch of air made me feel lonely
silence of water showed me the mirror of my sorrows
Suddenly my feet wet with water on the sand from flowing waves After covering whole scene in my eye: a tear flew away thus I went back to my home in last night

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  • 16 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Hmm. A touching piece. Moving in many ways. Great work!
    Greta
    xo

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this...the depth and emotion are clearly there, I thought it could have been a little longer, but apart from that you did a wonderful job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    In all truth, my attention was immediately hooked up upon reading this piece. But yet, I sense that this piece should be expanded. It seems to be a mere portion of an even greater poem.

    Nevertheless, one of its highlights is its vivid imagery. I liked the way you portrayed it and delivered it well. :)

    Thanks for sharing!

    -Marian

  • 16 years ago

    by Dee

    Very well done... its easy to understand so simple but still very powerfull. keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Short but very deep words.....
    Good write!!!

    God bless u

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