And he's gone....

by M i s s B e v a n x   May 12, 2007


You say your life's perfect
till it crashes down
it all ends
with one sorry frown.

He says Good-Bye
as he walks away
you know you'll never see him again
it's your worst day.

You collapsed to your knees
in the cold room
your face isn't smiling
but filled with dark gloom

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  • 16 years ago

    by Reaper

    Hey great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Han84

    Hey hun..
    erm this brought tears to my eyes because it were nearly exactly how my best lad mate left me.. and it brought up old hurt feeligs..
    god i miss him but hey..

    wel written

  • 16 years ago

    by The Undoing

    It is true that one thing can change things instantly there are countless quotes about it. This was good, a bit more length would be nice, but otherwise it was good . =)

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Excellent poem...beautiful work..short though but...great write...very powerful peice!..Kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Alma

    Wow. powerful poem
    it real captures the fact that your entire life can change in a simple moment
    loved it!
    5/5

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