Thanks alot....

by M i s s B e v a n x   May 12, 2007


When i look at your eyes
i fill up with joy
but you already know that
it's part of your ploy

I feel your arms rap my up
i know that i am home
then you let go of me
and i am left alone

We're perfect for each other
thats what i would say
but all my dreams end
on one measly day

Because i saw you
kissing my best mate
you did say your sorry
but its way to late

Good-bye.....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kersten

    AWWWW..... Thats good i like it, i felt the same wat about my EX... and ya i cought russell all over my best friend amanda lets just say we aren't best friends any more.....

  • 16 years ago

    by That Crazy Guy Chris

    I really dont know what stereotype means..That was random but i saw it in the last comment. Im stupid :p. kissing you best mate.. im sorry to hear this.. guys suck. well some guys. i cant insult my whole gender. :P

  • 16 years ago

    by Lover Boii

    This was a beautifully written poem. I love it completely. It is the kind of poem I have been looking for to describe why I don't like the stereotype guy.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by The Undoing

    :( aw. Hopefully it isn't true, but if it is, congrats on the right choice.
    Tough thing, saying goodbye.
    Well captured emotions and feelings, well done =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Black Princess

    Very relatable poem and so sad too. Well written keep it up. : )

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