Thanks for Everything

Hiya! here goes. :)

Stanza 1:
"I never thought I'd like my new school
I was a mysterious new boy here
Everyone was smiling and laughing
Except me. I was always in the corner."

> Such a sad stanza... automatically makes me feel pity for the young one :) Lovely opening though... couldn't have put it better myself :)

'Except me. I was always in the corner.'
- Makes me pity him more. very sad :)

Stanza 2:
"I had never imagine how lucky I am
To meet such great, wonderful people
They were there when I was down
They had helped me in everything... Thanks guys"

> This is a little better! :) Much more of a happier mood. Loved how it went from 'i was always in the corner'... to 'how lucky I am' > loved how you did this. :)

Stanza 3:
"Now I want to go back to the past
And be as happy, loud as them
They were beautifully wild...
All those moments with them"

> Such a beautiul stanza... brings me back to my memories.. and my childhood dreams and wishes and wants related to school :) Such beauty and imagery is created here.. :)

'Beautifully wild' - such strong words! Loved them! > my favourite bit :)

Last Line:
"Will reside in my sweet memories forever"

> ending is superb. loved it. Couldn't have used such words myself.. and left a sweet feeling inside :)

Poem Conclusion:
Loved this poem. From start to finish... it held me tight in the bond. If I didn't know any better, Im sure all who have moved school have felt this way... and for that I congratulate you for finding and expressing the feelings associated with it :)

` Well done!

` Good luck!

[ 5 / 5 ]

xx

A short, yet very beautiful poem.
The feelings you put in the poem were very clear.
You're very lucky to have all those friends who care about you, and they are very lucky to have you as their friend.
I really enjoyed reading this poem as I really enjoy reading all of your poems.
Take care

Marc =]!

Again another great poem from you ^^ This really shows how you feel/felt. And of course I know a little more about these feelings, so I absolutely love how you put it in this poem. Just one thing.. it's too short =P!! (Just because I wanted to keep on reading your poems =] I enjoy them ^^)
5/5
x

A simple poem which held so much emotion portrayed throughout it in depth. Also a nice tribute to people who really care about you and who you care about also. A sweetly written piece which was nicely written. Well done ~mel

This poem is great I loved it thanks for the comment on "The Void"