Imperfections [Tetractys]

by Tammie   May 15, 2007


To
Love a
Person, is
To see past the
Imperfections, to their inner beauty.

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Tetractys consist of at least 5 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 syllables.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    This could be a great quote.
    It's a true fact, though.
    Some people get shallow.

    Right now, I'm pretty heavy, like... fat, dawg.
    So this kind of brought up my spirtits a bit.

    Thanmk you :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Wonderful message with impact ! I love this form.

    Beautifully conveyed ....
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I love this style of poetry i have written several myself but havn't posted them on this site yet. The whole poem was written with such beauty. It was short short but held so much emotions. truely beautiful. Well done~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Brava m'dear!
    I have yet to try this format abd you've shown how to do it so beautifully..
    I love the ending, it was so poignant and most importantly, so true..
    Well done sweets, short, sweet simple yet so powerful!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Oh well done, the love and affection in this short and well thought out poem was amazing! the end line is very true and only true lovers can find that out.

    well done and keep writing, 5/5 always. David

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