You'll Always Be Fake...</3

The ending was just perfect. It was a powerful message, leave those who don't treat you right. Well done *5/5*

This was really cute.
I loved the emotion and your flow was beautiful!
great job!
5/5
((Amber))

Cute poem.. a bit cliche but still it has a nice flow and it was an ejoyable read

This is a standard love poem. Although, it is good, it is like a main stream love poem: similar emotions; and, similar actions.

I can link myself with the poem slightly enough to keep intruiged. The ending of the poem I liked the most.

Keep on writing, and try to be more original.

~Richi~

Wow, loved this poem also, great words, they were simple, but they had great emotion, yeah, I think it's a guy thing, guys are idiots, but we love them anyway, lol, anyway, loved the poem, it was ((amazing))!

5/5