For You, Blue

by debbylyn   May 20, 2007


For you, blue
Trilogy of pain
Trembling Earth
Ocean's mirth
Heaven's dour disdain

For you, blue
Tempest shaken mark
Fallen leaves
Bitter breeze
Cast into the dark

For you, blue
Love's incessant shade
Extended hand
Eternal band
Exalted sweet aubade

For you, blue
Destiny's design
Brilliant sky
Prayer's reply
Azure dreams align

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, this is so wonderful!
    Beautifully penned love poem, with superb imagery and great wording.
    Every stanza is breath- taking, the whole piece is extraordinary and very unique.
    Well done, keep up
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Again an impeccable word choice and flow. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Barry

    Sky blue... I think of you.....
    sky grey... you are my day....
    leaves...... but can't go
    bitter breeze....this wind I do not know

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was lovely, really good imagery, a little sad but there was love within the last few stanza's.
    keep the good work up, i love it!
    love Tara-Kay

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Great poem! Liked that style.