Don't Forget To Remember Me

Don't Forget To Remember Me,
When your time has come;
When you leave me, broken,
Never to see what I would become.

Don't Forget To Remember Me,
As you're shipped off over seas,
With me standing on the shore,
My hair blowing in the breeze.

Don't Forget To Remember Me,
When you're fighting that deadly war.
Remember there's someone here,
Someone you adore.

Don't Forget To Remember Me,
No matter what comes your way.
I won't forget to remember you,
Each and every day.

It won't be as hard for you;
As for me, it will be.
All I ask is for one more favor:
Don't Forget To Remember Me

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Don't Forget To Remember Me ; By: Ciao --> This is one that I'm sure will touch many military girlfriends hearts. It holds very strong emotions and it is told with such maturity that it is easier to relate to. I usually don't like the repetition of words, but in this case it was a good thing to have because it made the whole image stick out in my head more. This brought a tear to my eye, very good job Darling! =]

SPELLING - 3/3
GRAMMAR - 5/5
CONTENT - 5/5
FLOW - 4.5/5
OVER 8/UNDER 20 LINES - 2/2
TOTAL - 19.5/20